Ideas for the new Thorus the barbarian comic

Damn ! I've been so busy this month.
Too much studies, work and.. gaming. Sigh
Actually I play quite a lot fighting game. I attended to a DOA tournament some weeks ago. This gave me the motivation to improve myself, as there will be another tournament on january. As a result, I just had lesser time to draw. Playing fighting games seriously takes an incredible amount of time and energy : you have to train, learn the frame data, analyse your matchs, watch other peoples match, train again...Definitely not a wise idea, specially considered that I already train everyday  on KOF (02 and XIII) and play quite often Soulcalibur V. The worst : I've listened to a friend who suggested me to buy Skyrim on pc. This game is so great ! I tried to create a nordic that would look like Thorus. I should post some screenshot someday.

My CAS in SC V. Actually I main Ivy..

Enough with my pointless gamer life.



In this post I'll just put some few ideas about the new Thorus comic project.

Characters :

The princess :
She is very shy - maybe still a virgin. Impressed by Thorus muscles. She fantasies about huge cocks barbarians.

The dominating woman :
Sort of an executioner. Maybe she' ll look like Ivy in Soulcalibur. Or I should give her an executioner mask. I'll think about it. She should be fairly well endowed, with some good muscles, but not to much : she's not a fighter, but a dominating woman.

The amazon champion.
Named Avalon. A strong woman. Beaten by Thorus, she'll fall in love later.

The Queen : She's not a amazon., but a royal bitch. Thus, no muscle, she's overly busty and volupuous, and very arrogant. The kind of person who has never suffer in her life.

Potential plot :

Scene 1

Thorus. In a tavern ? Or some place other place. Maybe fucking some women. The fact is, he won't be able to fuck some girls for a long time once the story will start, so I may as well provide him some good time in the beginning...

Scene 2 : The capture by the amazons

In order to show Thorus' strenght, some battle scenes must be shown. I'm not sure about making him fighting monsters. I guess I should draw him fighting amazones.
Now this is interesting. I know that there are lot of peoples who enjoy watching men beaten by strong women. The fact is : Thorus is STRONG. Very strong. That's the main point of the comic, and the reason why he is wanted by all the females of the red empire. If he was a submissive sissy, that would jut ruin the whole sexiness of the scene where he is chained and teased by the prietress/princess ect..
He's appealing because he's a monster. A raw, savage barbarian feared by all his enemies. So he must be tough and powerful enough to whip any foe and smart enough to outmaneuver any enemy - except for magic. And this is his weak point, which I'll exploit for making his fight interesting.

Let's say Thorus fights the amazons. He defeats easily the three first amazons that come in front of him. This should be enough to show the reader how strong he is. (By the way what kind of move should he use ? I like wrestling moves, this can be very well fit barbarian characters, as in the game "Conan" on 360/ps3.)
Then comes the best amazon fighter. And this time, it won't be easy. The main point here is to make this amazon fighter extremely muscular and strong. And of course, busty and sexy.  She's going to charm the fucking pants right off of the muscle women fans. Maybe she would wear a sling bikini or a microbikini.

The question is : how muscular should she be ?
As for my personal tastes, I like women that are feminine. Not that I dislike some muscles on them, but too much may be well..too much.


She should deafeat easily some barbarians.
And to please this audience, she should show a fairly good fight with Thorus. She would fight well, but eventually Thorus must show his supremacy. (Remember : Thorus is STRONG).
The amazon champion (let's call her Avalon) could use the same sentence as Megan Avalon in this video :
http://www.dailymotion.com/video/xqvs4s_megan-avalon-topless_sexy#.UKezoob1BBk

(talking about her legs) "I've crished many man with these legs. They always bow down to me."
"I like to stick men between my thighs and crush them. It makes me feel so powerful"
(talking about her biceps) "Look at that hard bicep. 14 inches.  You think you can handle it ?" So hard...like you're probably right now." (great quote Megan !)
"Don't get too excited."


And this is where the sorceress would interfere. The sorceress would have no muscle at all, but she would be quite voluptuous. And smart. Maybe with some glasses ? She would throw a cast upon Thorus while he fights the amazon, which would result in this defeat. Maybe he would not be able to move for instance. This would enable me to draw the amazon champion dominate Thorus with some fierce moves. The great thing here is that this allows me to please the fans of strong muscular woman dominating man. During all the fight, the princess should watch the scene. She should be quite afraid of Thorus's power and brutality, but in the same time fascinated.

Once Thorus is captured, we can move to ...

Scene 3 :

Thorus is shown to the queen. The princesse observes the scene next to her.  Explication about the fact that the collar and  the chain that bid Thorus are magical, which explain even a freak like Thorus cannot destroy them. This magic also prevent Thorus from ejaculating. I think I'll draw the Queen sat on her throne. Next to her on each side there's a nude barbarian slave. The queen talks about why she keeps barbarians in jail. Mainly During the whole scene, while she talks, she provides a handjob to both slaves. Maybe at the end of the scene she'll drink both men's semence. During this scene Thorus ' cock should grow from a flacid state to a huge hard on.

Scene 4 :
In her room which is on the top of a tower, by a moolinght, the princess thinks about Thorus. She masturbate while thinking about Thorus' body.

Scene 5 :

The princess hears that Thorus in enslaved in the dungeon. She decides to replace one of the guard in charge of washing Thorus. This would enable me to draw a scene where she worshipes Thorus ' muscular body, washing it, massaging it. No sex here, just petting.

or

another script for this scene : There's a female slave who is supposed to be "served" for Thorus. The princess decides to change the place with the slave in order to be abused by Thorus. She would not reveal her name.

Scene 6 :

Thorus in conducted to his cell. He encounter the amazon Champion (Avalon). She tells Thorus that they had a good fight the other day. Maybe she would mock him. Or shows some respect. Anyway Thorus would not respond. The point is to show the reader that the proud amzon has fallen in love with Thaurus. She leaves...

Scene 6

Time for the dominating woman to enter. Lots of teasing there. At some point, Thorus should break free, and fuck her wild. He will then escape

Scene 7
Thorus end up fucking the amazon champion. She's enjoying it, although she wouldn't admit it. 

Anyway enough with the writing. I should start working on some layout and sketch thing out. Now the real fun shall begins !

I wish you all a happy new year.